5/23/11

Today we brought in our papers on Rome and peer edited them.  I did a three way switch, so I am not sure who's paper I got.  But I do know that Brad got my paper.  My paper was seven hundred and eighteen words long.  This was a bit too long of a paper.  Mr. Schick told me I need to shorten it to close to six hundred and fifty words.  I worked my butt off on that paper and apparently put to much detail in it.  Hopefully I will get 100 on it because it looked pretty much perfect to me with all of those words.